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Apollo
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Prima poezie dupa o perioadă lungă în care nu am scris nimic. Ei, poate îs nişte cuvinte adunate, nu poezie.

Am încercat

să te uit dar nu pot
te-am pierdut în timp
unde eşti, unde ai fost
când îmi trebuia un cuvănt
un alint

dar poate tu m-ai uitat
nu-ţi mai simt prezenţa
doar singurătate, umilinţă
şi singura mea dorinţă
să te am alături mine doar o clipă
chiar dacă ea va fi risipită
în neant - doar o clipă -
să-mi oferi
e tot ce-mi doresc

încerc să te găsesc
sunt pierdut, mă plimb într-un cerc
-fără sfărşit-
vreau totul, un gând ceresc
te iubesc, te iubesc, te iubesc...

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Apollo a scris:
Prima poezie dupa o durată îndelungă în care nu am scris nimic. Ei, poate îs nişte cuvinte adunate, nu poezie.

Am încercat

să te uit dar nu pot
te-am pierdut în timp
unde eşti, unde ai fost
când îmi trebuia un cuvănt
un alint

dar poate tu m-ai uitat
nu-ţi mai simt prezenţa
doar singurătate, umilinţă
şi singura mea dorinţă
să te am lângă mine doar o clipă
chiar dacă ea va fi risipită
în neant - doar o moment -
să-mi oferi
e tot ce-mi doresc

încerc să te găsesc
sunt pierdut, mă plimb într-un cerc
-fără sfărşit-
vreau totul, un gând ceresc
te iubesc, te iubesc, te iubesc...


Se poate mai bine, ma asteptam sa fii mai criptic si mai abstract!

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Lehel trebie sa-si revina din pumni
dupa o megapauza si-a pierdut antrenamentul
dar sunt sigura ca va reveni in forta


eu il astept la cotitura

o zi buna
revin
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si eu il astept
dar se da mare
n-ai sa-l mai vezi pe aici
punem de-un pariu
nasul meu nu ma inseala

ceau
soare

te iubesc, te iubesc, te iubesc ;-)
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Salutari- Am revenit.

Va prezint cateva dintre ultimele creatii. Sunt in engleza, cand imi gasesc timp le traduc Sorescu, special pentru tine!

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Confession
November 10, 2011

I must confess, for the longest while you were
nothing more than a face in the crowd
no real feelings towards you that could be spoken aloud
yet a ocazie is all it took, that second there
you robbed my heart, did you even care?

I must confess, I've been such a fool
for not being stronger, for being the tool
of my emotions that flew through my veins
for falling in love with you
it's funny how only touching your hand
was enough, will time ever mend
such a trivial love?

I must confess,I've never really forgotten you
as much as I tried, as much as I wanted to
the image of us walking while holding hands haunted
me each passing day, I've tried letting you go
every possible way.

I must confess, ten years have passed
yet a part of me still hangs on the past
and it won't let go no matter what I do
I guess I've grown used to it
grown used to love an image long gone
an image of you.

I must confess, a part of me hates you
since you've told me that you don't know
how to respond to my feelings, I've felt so low
that distant cold night when we danced
together, my core, my soul pranced
around like a child who got a new toy
no words to describe the happiness, the joy...
Yet all you had to say is that you're not worth it
that you're a whore.

I must confess, sometimes I think I've succumbed to insanity
for being the puppet of an image
that some would say is shrouded by blasphemy
How is it possible that the moment I lay my eyes on you
an avalanche of feelings come tumbling down,
there's no stopping them, I'm thrown back in the past
holding your hand.

I must confess, I could never stop the Sun shining
to prove my love, nor could I walk to the ends
of Earth just to make you see how time sometimes mends
all the scars you wear, all I could do is a simple kiss
followed by a smile, holding hands for a while, pure bliss.

I must confess, when my time will come
as I lay on my deathbed
my last breath, my final heartbeat\
Will whisper in your ear: "I love you"

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before and after Storm.
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White dreams
November 11, 2011

White dreams flowing into the abyss
the touch of a dying star, Suns gentle kiss
all rushing toward a fading mind
no sounds at all, I'm even blind
yet I see your soul trembling
worry not, feel no fear, I'm ascending
soon enough we will be together
today, tomorrow, forever.

A hand reaching to touch the sky
as you bathe in clouds, I fly
and the memory of being alone
giving birth to a gentle tone
that reaches your ears, do not weep
just close your eyes, sleep.

White dreams enveloped in cosmic breath
I was always near you, I never left
time has tainted my body but my intentions are pure
doesn't matter how much more pain I must endure
it is how it must be, this is fate
forging a path, never to early, never to late.

A broken body, a tormented soul
aimlessly flying around, has no goal
it doesn't take really that much
just looking in your eyes, just a touch
all that pain, all the agonizing torment
washed away, inviting happiness, enjoyment.

White dreams forming into a constellation
no longer must I endure the aberration
called life, it will only take a moment
for me to die, for me to fly. releasing all the dormant
passion I've always felt for you
at long last my dreams come true.

Two souls melted into one, the eternal desire
fueling our love creating such a fire
that all the oceans water could not put out
even the gods are smiling, there is no doubt
Heaven trembling, Hell cracks open
there aren't enough words to be spoken
of how much I've waited for this
your touch, your body, your kiss
Close your eyes, dream with me
feel my warmth, we are free.

White dreams flying with black wings
over the bard who now sings
the story of us being together
today, tomorrow, forever.

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before and after Storm.
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Enjoy silence then, even more."
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The corpse
November 13. 2011

There it lies, under the branches
of the magnificent tree of life
a corpse rotting away
whilst maggots feast knowing
this is indeed a memorable day.

No emotions, no feelings
no pain, no misery
no conception, no reaction
no tears, no suffering
no hatred, no lust
no thoughts, no soul
no ambitions, no goal
no desires, no fear
no disappointment, no expectations
no illusions, no dreams
just a ideal silence
and the sight of falling leafs
silence
and falling leafs.

Time flies, the corpse decays
time flies, it's disappearing
never to be seen again,
The Creator must be a genius
for bestowing upon us such a worthy end.

The tree of life is sprouting
another branch
The corpse long gone
only silence remains
and the image of falling leafs.

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before and after Storm.
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Enjoy silence then, even more."
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The gargoyle
November 16, 2011

The cathedral has locked its door
we hear the bells ringing one last time
weep, destroy, dream, sin no more
the gargoyle has awoken to judge our crime.

As it soars through the sky
the air becomes tinted with a reddish dye
turning into a river of blood
mixed with our bones, mixed with mud.

Ripping through flesh, young and old
stop running, there's no escape
enjoy your final moments, accept your fate
bodies all around, silent and cold.

Rejoice, a new era has begun
freedom, happiness all around
all sins washed away
by our own blood.

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Two stars
November 18, 2011

Two stars bound to walk a path
that may lead nowhere
one of them falling with grace
the other dying in disgrace

All it took was a random moment
in space and time
the two stars met
their fate entwined.

The lonely heart that gazed upon the sky
saw them fall together
the wish it thought would never
come true lit the sky forever.

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Memories from tomorrow
November 20, 2011

Memories of tomorrow
arriving to haunt me today
there is no point
in wishing them away
memories of tomorrow
flying in yesterday
where everything was okay.

We live in a sick, broken world
that takes its toll
you can't afford anything
not even a simple goal
of bittersweet gloomy dreams
it seems that even after we conquered everything
we failed to conquer ourselves.

Memories of tomorrow arriving to haunt you everyday
There isn't anything you can do, not even wish them away
Memories of tomorrow flying in your yesterday
Where everything was okay, yet you walked away.

Memories from tomorrow arrived at last
Ignore the future, forget the past
Memories from tomorrow, live them today
enjoy them while they last.

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Liquid dreams
November 21, 2011

Liquid dreams dipping from a verse
gradually melting into the Universe.
The sunset drowns in dawn
as words are written down.
And while the meek seek
ways of not being weak
dreams speak of light
as it trembles before the night
dreams which thwart
the beats of a gentle heart
it now is dark
such is the madness of art.

Liquid dreams flowing from anarchy
cleverly sown into our reality
The last ray of dim light
swallowed up by the night
and as remaining hope is about the embark
for a brighter future the ark
is being torn apart, everything drown--(ed)
no longer is life drawn.
Time's heart stopped beating
liquid dreams forgot believing
Such is the madness of art
it now is dark, dark; dark.

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Lying
23 November, 2011

All it takes for us to have a wonderful and blessed life
is to allow ourselves to be infatuated and breathe lies
keep telling yourself that you were forged for a great destiny
and every step you take opens your eyes to reality,
that deep down you are a beautiful, majestic being
and your deeds will someday be worth seeing, mentioned
by those you've left behind;
When you die of old age and your frail broken body
is placed in a wooden coffin, do you real think that anybody
will care that you're gone?
Oh, of course you'll be mentioned once in a while
until they start telling themselves: "We must move on."
In a hundred years no one will know who you were
so by all means, keep telling yourself how wonderful you are-
that once you've fulfilled your destiny
you will have escaped reality.

We willingly allow ourselves to live in lying
We willingly subdue our greatness to live in blindness
We willingly throw away everything that is humane
We willingly accept such a miserable fate
just for a dose of self pity
for a dose of lie
and as a reward for our obedience, we get to die.
"My, my such a pessimist, have a little hope
have a little faith in God, in Jesus our Savior"
god is not real, god is a lie born out of necessity
so that our world is not thrown in complete anarchy
god is not love but an dispozitiv of war
god is not hope but a whip
that constantly lashes on the weak
allowing them to live in a false sense of security
"Everything is ok, I have God through eternity."
god is not pure but a seed of lie
planted in our subconscious
go ahead, sin, commit crimes
burst into existence, defy everything
it's alright, all you have to do is ask for forgiveness
and in the end thou shall have it.
If there truly was a GOD, all knowing- all seeing, all everything
it would wish its and our existence away so nothing
could pollute, infect and slowly destroy Earth.
"My, my no wonder you have never found God
I shall pray for your soul..."
"..."

We desperately crawl towards the light
we desperately try to open our eyes
we desperately try to be alive
we desperately fight for a bit of control
while the scum who control religion, money and justice
thrive on our desperation, laughing at our inferiority
this my friends, is the true face of reality, the true lie
that became our reason to exist.
"We sweat blood every day
yet are allowed to dream
What we hope for someday will come to life
an we shall bathe in the blood of those
who sucked on every bit of soul we had
and then we will be free
we will have destroyed our chains of captivity!"
"..."

We willingly allow ourselves to live in lying
....as we desperately crawl towards the light
We willingly subdue our greatness to live in blindness
....as we desperately try to open our eyes
We willingly throw away everything that is humane
....as we desperately try to stay alive
We willingly accept our miserable fate
....as we desperately fight for a bit of control.


We have the power to fix everything that is broken
but if we keep living a lie
our only reward will be to... die.

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Escape
November 24, 2011

Sometimes I just want to escape
in a corner of my mind
in a room
with no doors, no windows
no air, no light
no poetry, no thoughts
nothing but me
alone by myself.
Sometimes I just want to be
an immaterial being
not even worth mentioning
not even worth seeing.

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Enjoy silence now, before
Enjoy silence then, even more."
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ma bucur ca ai revenit :-)
incredibil, dar adevărat
pentru cat timp?
nu indraznesc sa sper la mai mult
cu drag
eu
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sorescu a scris:
ma bucur ca ai revenit :-)
incredibil, dar adevărat
pentru cat timp?
nu indraznesc sa sper la mai mult
cu drag
eu



O eternitate şi un pic (:

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